Outline and Body Paragraph for Prompt: "Describe the best way to honor a hero."
- Honoring a hero
- Annual festival
- Parade with band
- An important official gives a speech
- A big banquet at a big building
- Reason
- People will remember the hero if a commemorative festival is held annually
- People will remember what the hero did if the official talks about it during the speech
- People will remember the hero, also, by associating the memory of the hero with yummy food - human beings always seem to work better with food.
One way to honor a hero would be to hold a festival. There would be lots of participants, and there would also be a parade with a band. After the parade, and important official would give a speech, talking about the hero's good deeds. Finally, there would be a big banquet at a big building.
There are many reasons why this would be the best way to honor a hero. People will remember the hero if a commemorative festival is held annually, because it would be hammered into their heads - "Festival commemorating _______ tomorrow! Festival commemorating _______ on the 9th! Festival commemorating _______ in September!" People will also remember what the hero did, because the official would provide many details about the great event every year, and so the memory would be refreshed every year, too. Finally, people will remember the hero, also, by associating the memory of the hero with yummy food, because human brains tend to be better at remembering things and calculating equations that involve food.
There are many reasons why this would be the best way to honor a hero. People will remember the hero if a commemorative festival is held annually, because it would be hammered into their heads - "Festival commemorating _______ tomorrow! Festival commemorating _______ on the 9th! Festival commemorating _______ in September!" People will also remember what the hero did, because the official would provide many details about the great event every year, and so the memory would be refreshed every year, too. Finally, people will remember the hero, also, by associating the memory of the hero with yummy food, because human brains tend to be better at remembering things and calculating equations that involve food.
I think there should be more details in the first paragraph.
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