Outline and Body Paragraph for Prompt: "Describe your school. Think about what you like and what you don't like. How could you improve it?"

1.      School

o   Pros and Cons

§  Pro = Great teachers for higher grades

§  Con = Bad quality lunches

§  Want to make lunches better

o   Making lunches better

§  Start a program with a place like Whole Foods Market

§  Get healthier lunches

§  Increase the price of school lunch to a price that the company will accept

1.      Conclude

To make lunches better, I think my school should start with a simple program to make school lunches healthier and tastier. The school could start a partnership with Whole Foods Market, and let the Market deliver food to the school. The school would get healthier lunches, and some part of the profit would be delivered back to Whole Foods. The price of school lunch would go up, and more people would buy it because the quality is better. Think about it – it’s good for everyone.