Outline and Body Paragraph for Prompt: "Describe your favorite game. Explain why it is your favorite."

•  Favorite Game - Kirby's Return To Dreamland

1. Great graphics

• The backgrounds seem are very realistic
• The 3-D effects seem very real
• The characters are all very bright and eye-catching

1. Motivating storyline

• At the start of the game, there is an animation of a ship crashing into the ground and then sending "energy spheres" everywhere.
• The goal of the game is to collect all the energy spheres.
• The levels are hard, but at the end of each world, the reward - an "energy sphere" - motivates the player to keep going

1. Conclude

          One reason my favorite game is a Wii game called "Kirby's Return To Dreamland" is because it has a motivating storyline. When you create a profile at the very start of the game, right after the "Play" button is pressed, there would be an animation of a ship flying through the sky with smoke trailing behind it, and then the ship would crash into the ground and send "energy spheres" everywhere.The goal of the game was to rebuild the ship with the missing "energy spheres", and every time I got a new part for the ship, a little video clip played on the part being attached to the ship. The levels were hard, but the "energy sphere" rewards at the end of each world motivated me to keep playing and keep earning new parts to the ship.