My Favorite Team Sport
Basketball, soccer, baseball, tennis… what’s your favorite
team sport? My favorite team sport is soccer. This is my favorite team sport
because it is very fun to kick the ball around and also because it’s very
fast-paced.
The first reason I like soccer is because it’s very fun to
kick the ball around. I really enjoy when I have the ball, because I can kick
it really far. To me, it is fun to kick the ball as high as I can, because I
can test my own strength. I enjoy passing and “boof”ing the ball around, and
ultimately, scoring – the most rewarding part of the game.
The other reason I like soccer is because it is very
fast-paced. Instead of waiting… waiting… still waiting…, I can get in the
action immediately. It’s like playing games without the “loading…” part. I
enjoy this because I don't like waiting. It gets me really bored or irritated
In soccer, I get to rush right to the ball and try to score. I don't have to wait
for any amount of time.
This is my favorite team sport because I think the sport is easier and better with a team. You don't have to just rely on yourself. When you're in a tight situation, you can pass the ball to a teammate and let him score. The game is more interesting with a team because one minute the ball could be almost taken away by an opponent, and the next minute the ball could be in the opponent's goal!
This is my favorite team sport because I think the sport is easier and better with a team. You don't have to just rely on yourself. When you're in a tight situation, you can pass the ball to a teammate and let him score. The game is more interesting with a team because one minute the ball could be almost taken away by an opponent, and the next minute the ball could be in the opponent's goal!
Even though there are many other great team sports out there,
my favorite team sport is soccer because I enjoy the fun of kicking the ball
and the quickness of it all.
"Team"! is the most important. Let's add a paragraph emphasis on "team" work!
ReplyDeleteBetter version now, but please be careful to "indent". Also, we could probably emphasis a little bit more on the "co-operation" and "team"spirit. For example, you can have team strategy instead of just individual tactic. Go get smarter as a team. And it is probably different feeling when you have team mates to share you happiness
ReplyDeleteI should have indented on line 13 - that's a new paragraph. Otherwise, I think my details are okay - but I still need some more of them.
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